Daniel’s Scots Poem
Posted by loirston in June 12, 2007 
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Comments(2) Listen to me reading my poem here
The wee bairns in the sea,
The soond o the waves crashin,
The lasses scurling,
The mither pitting on sincream,
The whisperin o the mas an das,
Wee laddies learnin tae swim,
The beach?
A blimmin zoo filled wi fowk!
great stuff Daniel – not only did your words get that ‘busy’ feeling of the beach but the way that you read the poem was most evocative – ‘ a blimminn’ zoo IT IS!!!!!’