Kelly’s poem about Duthie park

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In the Duthie park,

Riding my scooter,

I’m really happy,

It is nice and sunny,

What will I do next?

 

 

In the Duthie Park,

Eating an ice-cream,

Mmm, it’s delicious,

It is toffee flavoured,

Will I go to the swings?

 

 

In the Duthie Park,

Looking at a Dachshund,

I’m really surprised,

They’re my Favourite breed of dog,

Will I ever get one of my own?

 

 

In the Duthie Park,

We walk to the car,

I’m exhausted,

It is getting cloudy,

I’m glad we’re going home!

 

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3 Comments so far

  1.   sokeina on May 30th, 2007

    Hi,
    Great poem its so cool, what type of dog is a Dachshund.
    I love toffe flavoured icecream. When i go to the park my favourite equipment to play on is the slide and the swing.
    Tooooooooodles :)

  2.   Tyrone on June 6th, 2007

    Great poem!!

    I wish I had a dog.

  3.   loirston on June 11th, 2007

    A dachshund is a tiny german hound, with a very long body, and really short legs. People sometimes call it a ’sausage dog!’

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