The Loch ness monster by Ryan




  
A long time ago I was going out with my children when I saw a little head popping out of the Loch. I thought it was just rocks so to prove it I took a camera and zoomed in. It was moving. I took a photograph and brought it to the professor and showed it to him. He was shocked. He thought it was just rocks like what I said so he got his friend to see if there really was a Loch ness monster. 

His friend Andy and I got our swimming suits on and dived in. It was freezing but we never gave up until we came to a cave. We saw the Loch ness monster so we swam fast to catch it but it was hugely dangerous and very fast. As we swam through the dark cave, it was so dark it was like a huge black curtain over it.

 We carried on until and we realised that we ended up in an even darker cave so we had to take our torch out and switch it on but we still couldn’t see much. I felt something squidgy under my feet. Andy and I swam under to see what it was. It was huge when you were beside it. I took it by the tail and Andy tried to chain it up. We took the monster back up to the shore and then stuck it in a very big tank before it swam away. 

“Here you go professor,” repeated Andy.

“ What in the world is that”? Asked the professor” in a surprised voice. Right I will take a photo and I will show everyone that the Loch ness monster is real. Now let it go free because I have all that I need.

   

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  1.   Marshall on June 6th, 2007

    Great story!!! How about you add some pictures and have you really seen the Loch ness monster?

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