lee’s loch ness monster story

It started off like any Sunday.  My dad and I would  go down in our submarine. We would   look for fish like we  would every Sunday  when suddenly  this big hairy green fat thing jumped out at  us. I thought it was a very large fish  but my dad said it was too big to be a fish. It was about  sixteen feet  long we took a photograph and it led us back to a cave.

  

We took  a photo home and showed my mum .She was really surprised. She said,” It can’t be the Loch Ness monster that is just a myth!” but we saw it.

“It was so big we will take  you right now,” I replied.

  We went into the submarine and  we found the cave  and went in to it and there were stacks of sea creatures all around. The Loch Ness monster had a huge family around him so we got a camera. Then we thought about it. The cave was like another land. We agreed not to tell anyone so they would we free  instead of being locked up. We threw away  the camera and we came out to the cave every Sunday to visit our new monster friends.

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